tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post1509531725694166464..comments2022-04-01T10:18:42.341-04:00Comments on Tweet Pals-Twitosphère: The Tweet Pals 1 students in Montreal + the Haiku, the summary and the mini-story!TweetPals-Twitosphèrehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00256956773383055149noreply@blogger.comBlogger106125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-69494015247177809802011-04-18T02:28:00.774-04:002011-04-18T02:28:00.774-04:00#happyoctopi
@GuerlensRF At 26th december I always...#happyoctopi<br />@GuerlensRF At 26th december I always cook turkey. My mother and i made the dish and my brothers did the housework. My father slept until that<br /><br />For dates, you usually use "on" instead of "at." Also, "made" and "did" are in the past tense, but you're saying here that you 'always cook turkey,' which is an ongoing action. "My father slept until that" is unclear. When is 'that'? It might be either 'until we begin cooking' or 'until the turkey is ready.'<br /><br />Therefore, this should go something like this:<br /><br />I always cook turkey on December 26th. My mother and I make the dish and my brothers do the housework. My father sleeps until we begin cooking/ the turkey is ready.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-2353597839722465322011-04-14T14:43:39.922-04:002011-04-14T14:43:39.922-04:00#happyoctopi
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C'est un mini-récit t...#happyoctopi<br /><br />@mihullers<br />C'est un mini-récit très beau. Je l'adore! Je joue du piano aussi et je pense que cette histoire est fantastique. <br /><br />@LaaayyzzyBoy<br />Ah, ton mini-récit est très triste! Pourquoi est-ce qu'elle ne vive pas?<br /><br />@OtakuSignal<br />Pourquoi est-ce que le royaume était en danger?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-23355809397969330462011-04-14T14:37:18.927-04:002011-04-14T14:37:18.927-04:00#regeenie619
@DreamJeny The story is about the sp...#regeenie619 <br />@DreamJeny The story is about the spook's apprentice. The apprentice learned and fought hard to become the best of all spooks<br /><br />qu'est-ce que spook en anglais?Regine Remigionoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-21406648112943618772011-04-14T14:37:04.366-04:002011-04-14T14:37:04.366-04:00@roufibella "the color of the sky makes me wa...@roufibella "the color of the sky makes me want to fly like a bird in the sky the trees are so green like a parade in the other world make me stunned" Hey (: Cool poem! Just a little correction and something to make things flow more... Instead of saying "mak(ing)me stunned" you could change it to "stunning me". That way, the poem will flow along more nicely. #SisiAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-13427257756551364342011-04-14T14:35:31.334-04:002011-04-14T14:35:31.334-04:00@dalhiaaihlad #mullover_elide trop mal! j'ador...@dalhiaaihlad #mullover_elide trop mal! j'adore les vacations, tu devrais aller aux places mieuxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-67980243298683961132011-04-14T14:35:03.827-04:002011-04-14T14:35:03.827-04:00#echen94
@ameni_164_tn Cinderella suffered all her...#echen94<br />@ameni_164_tn Cinderella suffered all her life with her stepmother. Thanks to the fairy, she met the prince at a ball and he decided to marry her.<br />Bravo! il n'y a pas des erreur et l'histoire est simple :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-17943256409712577332011-04-14T14:34:51.759-04:002011-04-14T14:34:51.759-04:00@Meltwit011 #andrewchen123 "Anna decides to l...@Meltwit011 #andrewchen123 "Anna decides to live in New York,she falls in love with an American but their love was impossible and forbidden because the both was married" First of all, the comma in the sentence should be a period since they are 2 separate ideas. Also, it shouldnt be "the both was married", instead of "the" you should replace it with "they". Since both is pluaral, you should change "was" to "were"Andrew Chennoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-31328182328791133742011-04-14T14:33:52.900-04:002011-04-14T14:33:52.900-04:00@BiigJoo Penner with Kings, sounds like good playo...@BiigJoo Penner with Kings, sounds like good playoffs for me !<br /><br />Est-ce que tu joues d'hockey sur glace??Regine Remigionoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-83259556551283218262011-04-14T14:33:39.761-04:002011-04-14T14:33:39.761-04:00@tranemil #mullover_elide C'est tragique, j...@tranemil #mullover_elide C'est tragique, j'espere que ca ne se passera a moiAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-15065537685959286542011-04-14T14:31:52.634-04:002011-04-14T14:31:52.634-04:00#nixonkwok
@shootop A man finds his daughter dead...#nixonkwok<br /><br />@shootop A man finds his daughter dead body in front of her school. To get revenge, the man kidnapped the murderer and tortured him for seven days.<br />-Ce récit est effrayant!<br /><br />@futureboatdrive The book speaks about the life of a student and a joker during the middle-age in France. In this book, we learned a lot of secret from past.<br />-Qu'est-ce que c'est le titre de le livre?<br /><br />@LaaayyzzyBoy A women has been hit by a car. The emergency brought her to the hospital. When she finally arrived there, she died a few minutes after.<br />-J'ai espéré pour une conclusion heureux!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-50786639559047460712011-04-14T14:31:44.346-04:002011-04-14T14:31:44.346-04:00#lasophiale @HuangDHuang "Leaves start changi...#lasophiale @HuangDHuang "Leaves start changing colour And they fall down one by one As day passes by more and more gather Soon all will disapear" should be "Leaves start changing colour, And they fall down one by one, As the day passes by, more and more gather, soon all will disappear."sophia Lenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-45456601254854140442011-04-14T14:30:41.533-04:002011-04-14T14:30:41.533-04:00@Mikee2704 Short story: A woman got hit by a car a...@Mikee2704 Short story: A woman got hit by a car at 100km/h and she end up with zero injuries.<br /><br />Correction; A woman got hit by a car at 100km/h and ended up with no injuries.Regine Remigionoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-44689415815299708822011-04-14T14:30:27.537-04:002011-04-14T14:30:27.537-04:00#jennyychan @n3fr3t93 He saw a beautiful girl and ...#jennyychan @n3fr3t93 He saw a beautiful girl and he fail in love. he bought flowers, necklace and ring but she didin't won this guy and Louis kill himself. <br /><br />It should be He saw a beautiful girl and fell in love with her. He bought her flowers, necklace and a ring, but she didn't like this guy so he killed himself.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-37943907994374176962011-04-14T14:29:47.904-04:002011-04-14T14:29:47.904-04:00@simplicityQ
"Today, I woke up and my bottl...@simplicityQ <br /><br />"Today, I woke up and my bottle of water was empty.I raged and went to the store to get a new bottle.Unfortunately, they were out of stock."<br /><br />Quel dommage!i_heartfrenchhttp://twitter.com/i_heartfrenchnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-57943564200732957062011-04-14T14:29:39.341-04:002011-04-14T14:29:39.341-04:00#e_rnestli @Dydy_F "My name is Felicia I did ...#e_rnestli @Dydy_F "My name is Felicia I did my biggest fight with Cancer." should be "My name is Felicia and I had my biggest fight with Cancer." This is because you don't do cancer, you have cancer. "Cancer controled my body.And it sent me in paradise.I'm at peace and I won this fight." should be "Cancer controlled my body and it sent me to paradise.I'm at peace and I won this fight." You shouldn't begin a sentence with "and".Ernest Linoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-44425541260734733892011-04-14T14:29:35.187-04:002011-04-14T14:29:35.187-04:00@DreamJeny #mullover_elide Je toujours adore un hi...@DreamJeny #mullover_elide Je toujours adore un histoire des gens qui ascendent au fortitude.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-76729656918578909842011-04-14T14:28:47.764-04:002011-04-14T14:28:47.764-04:00simplicityQ LE JOUEUR : A slave played at the casi...simplicityQ LE JOUEUR : A slave played at the casino and became a richman. He won the money for a girl that he try to get over and over again .<br /><br />Ton histoire est très inspirant. :)i_heartfrenchhttp://twitter.com/i_heartfrenchnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-39621609997161707302011-04-14T14:28:36.349-04:002011-04-14T14:28:36.349-04:00@Kaze1314 "I have no money in my wallet, but ...@Kaze1314 "I have no money in my wallet, but I'm hungry. Then I find 5$ on the street, so I go to eat McDonald's. And now I'm feeling better." J'aime McDonalds beaucoup! C'est le meilleur (: #SisiAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-63535200432031595462011-04-14T14:27:29.254-04:002011-04-14T14:27:29.254-04:00#sophiale @ameni_164_tn j'aime l'été beauc...#sophiale @ameni_164_tn j'aime l'été beaucoup!Sophia Lenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-11999392069158551992011-04-14T14:27:04.000-04:002011-04-14T14:27:04.000-04:00@YoussefBene Haiku : If I could just forget Things...@YoussefBene Haiku : If I could just forget Things you did to me The person I thought you were Maybe I'd live better<br /><br />J'adore ton haiku!i_heartfrenchhttp://twitter.com/i_heartfrenchnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-32469519912455566782011-04-14T14:26:28.650-04:002011-04-14T14:26:28.650-04:00@KuroHoshi3107 Snow crying Sun smiling Students tw...@KuroHoshi3107 Snow crying Sun smiling Students tweeting Me singing<br /><br />Ton poème est génial!Regine Remigionoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-61553057342619397892011-04-14T14:25:45.812-04:002011-04-14T14:25:45.812-04:00@Kaze1314 "I have no money in my wallet, but ...@Kaze1314 "I have no money in my wallet, but I'm hungry. Then I find 5$ on the street, so I go to eat McDonald's. And now I'm feeling better.<br /><br />It should be:<br />I have no money in my wallet, but I'm hungry. I found $5 on the sground, so I went to eat McDonald's, and now I'm feeling better.<br /><br />good job :)i_heartfrenchhttp://twitter.com/i_heartfrenchnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-58577844019046703792011-04-14T14:24:47.423-04:002011-04-14T14:24:47.423-04:00#VivianCheung @shootop Vos mini-récits font peur!#VivianCheung @shootop Vos mini-récits font peur!Vivian Cheungnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-27653251839658119542011-04-14T14:23:01.414-04:002011-04-14T14:23:01.414-04:00#lasophiale @alexzarzour Oh la la, j'aime votr...#lasophiale @alexzarzour Oh la la, j'aime votre mini-récit beaucoup! c'est très romantique!Sophia Lenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5938208729255146583.post-17384702312603933452011-04-14T14:21:43.838-04:002011-04-14T14:21:43.838-04:00@GuerlensRF "At 26th december I always cook t...@GuerlensRF "At 26th december I always cook turkey. My mother and i made the dish and my brothers did the housework. My father slept until that" Haha, mon père ne fait rien aussi... mais, de temps en temps il va au supermarché pour acheter la dinde (: #SisiAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com