Thursday, March 24, 2011

L'écriture minuscule selon les élèves de Twitosphère 3 à Saint-Boniface!

Les élèves du groupe Twitosphère 3 à Saint-Boniface continuent avec leur création twittéraire : le résumé ou l’écriture minuscule!

En utilisant la fonction commentaire ci-dessous :

  • Twitosphère 3 peuvent élaborer sur leurs propres tweets (en Français)
  • Tweet Pals 1 (Montréal) et Tweet Pals 2 (Québec) peuvent commenter sur les tweets (en Anglais) et les corriger (en Français)
  • Twitosphère 1 (Vancouver) et Twitosphère 2 (Toronto) peuvent commenter sur les tweets (en Français) et les corriger (en Anglais)

Le résumé ou l’écriture minuscule

nruof Pendant que je m'achète un repas de 20$, de l'autre côté du monde ils cherchent désespérément un seul dollar pour arrêter leur famine... [corrigé]
nruof Pendant que je m'achète un repas de 20$, de l'autre côté ils cherchent désespérément un seul dollars pour arrêter leur famine... :'(

abmabma j'aime le Canada,c'est un pays ou les gens aiment vivre en harmonie.N'importe la race nous sommes tous ensembles et égaux.

nnamuen Lire et écrire sont des melleurs amis car il est impossible de lire si on ne peut pas écrire!

nnodnad Planche de skate La vie est comme une planche de skate. Ça t’amène à des endroits et ça va vite. Des fois on tombe et on doit se lever :)

obmossam Depuis le tremblement de terre au japon ils cherchent de l'eau, mais nous ici on gaspille de l'eau.

ebaynay Quand le ciel s'éclaircit le soleil apparait.Quand il pleut la terre est humide.Je viens de vous expliquer le fond de mon coeur.

ereissem À Winnipeg je n’ai pas peur. Au Japon ont a peur de la mort. À Winnipeg je n’ai pas peur de la nuit. Au Japon on a peur pendant nuit.

duaeb Pendant que des gens meurent de faim, pleins de restos jettent par la fenêtre de la nourriture fraîche, si seulement on pouvait y penser.

qsevel Je joue au hockey pas pour la coupe Stanley mes pour s'amuser.Ce n'est pas le bâton qui fait le joueur mais plutôt ce qu'on a dans le coeur.

ovacm Ici nous avons plusieurs droits, comme l'accès à l'éducation. En afrique, ils n'ont pas tous c'est droit. Ils rêvent de pouvoir les avoir.

edlewet Depuis que je t'ai rencontré depuis que nos chemins ce sont croisés tu m'as donné l'envie d'aimer, d'aimer que toi seul.

obiug Méchants nids de poules, vous venez ici chaque printemps pour nous causer des problèmes! Tout le monde haït les nids de poules!

aburak1 Canada, mon pays! Un pays magnifique, beau, froid, avec une grande cours arrière remplie de montagnes, rivières et feuilles d’érable.

uaeled Pendant qu'on jette de la nourriture sans y penser, en Afrique on meurt de faim! Au Canada on est pas assez reconnaissant de notre chance!

N'oubliez pas de mettre le #hashtag (#mot-clic) pour vous identifier et le @pseudo Twitter pour indiquer le tweet dont vous commentez. Merci!

Wednesday, March 23, 2011

The Tweet Pals 1 students in Montreal + the Haiku, the summary and the mini-story!

Tweet Pals 1 in Montreal have been practicing their English and the use of Twitter. They have tried their hand at the Haiku, the summary and the mini-story!

Using the comment form below:

  • Tweet Pals 1 can elaborate on the tweets they wrote (in English)
  • Tweet Pals 2 (Quebec City) can comment upon the tweets (in English) and can correct the tweets (in French)
  • Twitosphère 1 (Vancouver), Twitosphère 2 (Toronto) and Twitosphère 3 (Saint-Boniface) can comment upon the tweets (in French) and can correct the tweets (in English)

The mini-poem: the Haiku

LaaayyzzyBoy Haïku I'm a bird who wants to fly away but to make that dream come true, I have to prepare my self and clean up the road.

Mikee2704 Haiku: It took me one second to notice you, a minute to love you, but it would take the eternity to forget you.

shashou67 haïku : God can love for lenght but human can just love for a moment

KuroHoshi3107 Snow crying Sun smiling Students tweeting Me singing

mihullers air:gentle,cold...the earth was breathing and covered with snow...

futureboatdrive The snow is felted... the green putted out the white... my hearth feel this frozen breath forever... i want the winter back.

roufibella the color of the sky makes me want to fly like a bird in the sky the trees are so green like a parade in the other world make me stunned

samyy_o I would like that I just need to raise my hands and get the moon easily for keep it like if it's an important gift.

HuangDHuang Leaves start changing colour And they fall down one by one As day passes by more and more gather Soon all will disapear

YoussefBene Haiku : If I could just forget Things you did to me The person I thought you were Maybe I'd live better

OtakuSignal Small lily She watches every single of our movements Dancehall under the red moon Bitter farewells

coolstorybraaah "Cats", said the Chinese surgeon, While beautiful gifts of nature, Are tantalizing meals And after surgery is done, I must brush my theeth.

tranemil Lonely winter night, Snow glitters in the moonlight, It lightens me up.

ameni_164_tn I walk on the sand the heat is scorching the sea beyond me smiling birds flying all day summer is finally back

GuerlensRF HAIKU. I like turkey It's so Juicy Like an orange Juice When I eat turkey The sun raise to the sky Cold becomes Hot I'm in love with turkey

Summary or minuscule writing

misachan12 A twelve year old girl gets a journal and learns about a girl named Sara. On her birthday, she decided to honor Sara by telling her story.

Mikee2704 Summary: It's the story of Bruno Hamel, he had a good life until his daughter got killed. Basicly, he kidnaps the assassin and tortures him.

benjileroi it's the story of a guy who killed his family because some voices telling him. I'm sad.

sarareine sur la point des piends,it is an immigrante girl in canada,she likes to dance ,one day the gisl he falls in love with the boy in this class

shawtyyheart "Chinese letters"is a sad love story between two lovers.The novel brings together letters written about the impossible love seperating them.

KuroHoshi3107 My book tells a story about a child sold by her parents to a district of slavery. To escape the miserable life in Japan she'll become Geisha

roufibella it's comic strip of a rich person who has ole that he wants except happiness so he understand that money does not make happiness

futureboatdrive The book speaks about the life of a student and a joker during the middle-age in France. In this book, we learned a lot of secret from past.

Kaze1314 my book is <là où la mer commence>(where the sea begins) It talk about the story of beauty and beast. but, no magic. it likely real life.

coolstorybraaah L'amant : A poor French was deeply in love with a rich Chinese man. Despite their difference in society, their love was inseperabe.

YoussefBene Summary:Michael Haller, best lawyer ? The main character on the Lincoln Lawyer had to defend a psychopath but he managed to put him in jail.

samyy_o I'm reading a book collection. The title of this is Skully Fourbery.
samyy_o It's about skeleton detective who resolved mysteries and arrested bad persons with his accomplice.

ameni_164_tn Cinderella suffered all her life with her stepmother. Thanks to the fairy, she met the prince at a ball and he decided to marry her.

Dydy_F Summary:La lettre écarlate;A women is juged because she is pregnant with an other man than her husband.And the jury decided to punish.

simplicityQ LE JOUEUR : A slave played at the casino and became a richman. He won the money for a girl that he try to get over and over again .

OtakuSignal "The Nazi and the Barber" tells the story of a man who participated to the holocaust of WWII. After the war, the man decides to become jew.

amirkrayem ''Le visiteur du soir'' is a detective story. Throughout the novel, the police tried to trap the person who stole a painting from a museum.

GuerlensRF Le meurtrier sans visage. An old man was assassinated and a detective in charge a case to search for the criminals who left no traces

shootop A man finds his daughter dead body in front of her school. To get revenge, the man kidnapped the murderer and tortured him for seven days.

abi2828 Maidservant was mistreated by her landlord. Whit time, they fell in love. Finally, they got married and had many children.

LaaayyzzyBoy It's the story of a cowboy who lost his parents when he was younger than he pasts his entire life to find the murderer.

Meltwit011 Anna decides to live in New York,she falls in love with an American but their love was impossible and forbidden because the both was married

ILuvCereal17 Good guys don't always win like the Emperor and his Imperium of Man. It was his fall from grace and gave place to chaos and disorder.

Unitedspace25 it`s the story of people who watch crisis and probleme, they are worried and complain and what they are going to do about it ... nothing

jane_172 the story is about a guy and his friends. One day, they found a baby. They decide to take the baby and bring her to the police.

Djboss23 The story is about a old man tried to find a secret to rescue his wife he went east,destroyed everybody tried to stop him and day he find it

The mini-story in 140 characters

futureboatdrive During my last trip on the sea, she asked me to follow her. Her beautiful voice attracted me and his sadness took my life for the eternity.

ILuvCereal17 The beautiful landscapes represents our fantastic escape. Our lush green forests, our national parks being one of the bests. I wonder ...
ILuvCereal17 Once this lone dog was wandering in the streets, then a very kind man found him and sheltered it. The dog was a demon and murdered the man.

Mikee2704 Short story: A woman got hit by a car at 100km/h and she end up with zero injuries.
Mikee2704 Domestic violence is something that can be physical,verbal, economic or else and it usually happens at home, in a couple or between family.

misachan12 A woman meets by accident a man.They fall at first sight in love.After a few year,the woman leave her husband and gets married with the man.
misachan12 He never realized that she was sick He caused her pain without knowing When he finally came around It was already to late

n3fr3t93 You know the night is dray without you.I can't sleep, mornings don't show the light. I'm crying here because I love you so much.
n3fr3t93 He saw a beautiful girl and he fail in love. he bought flowers, necklace and ring but she didin't won this guy and Louis kill himself.

Unitedspace25 It`s everything but I can`t describe It`s coming and going but I don`t understand are they something I wish I could see it more clearly
Unitedspace25 A boy named Jacob lost his older brother after that met his uncle and found him in another world and discovers he is the chosen one

roufibella a mouse go out of her hole without noise she quickly crossed the kichen to find somthing to nourish her child but the cat eat her

shootop A teenager gets lost in the woods, he finds a temple of the shogun era. A priest asks him to seat near the coffin. The coffin swallow him.
shootop The wind blows, the six path of the dream opens, my soul is freed from the darkness and the world open to me. I reborn again as a new being.

mihullers she plays the piano softly...she fails and her master shout her,she was barely breathing,she decides to continue,he apologizes she smiles.
mihullers anyone sees Claire:a girl was almost invisible, when she finally became an invisible person, someone was able to see her..and maybe,love her

Kaze1314 Who really knows love? Don't say it's your heart Because nobody knows love It's only the time that knows How love is important.
Kaze1314 I have no money in my wallet, but I'm hungry. Then I find 5$ on the street, so I go to eat McDonald's. And now I'm feeling better.

shawtyyheart I hate you as much as i dislike eating cheese. But i don' t know why my heart can' t stop beating... everytime i see your beautiful smile.<3
shawtyyheart I had been deeply in love with him seen kindergarten. However, he didn't know. In the end, I found out that I was only a sister to him. </3

abi2828 Death comes around and goes around She has no firends but a lot of enemies She loves everyone but no body cares about her :)
abi2828 A student fell in love with his teacher. She fell in love too and they got married. They had babies but one died. Emilie left her husband.

LaaayyzzyBoy A women has been hit by a car. The emergency brought her to the hospital. When she finally arrived there, she died a few minutes after.

KuroHoshi3107 A lost kitten with his ball of wool suddenly fell from a cliff He has to take the wool to hang on a tree root Kitten's safe, ball's dead :(

sarareine one night i went with my friends a feast of culture.i see the boy, when i talk with him a descovered is my friend on facbook

coolstorybraaah Japan has been working on a new technology :going to the beach without physical work.Their idea was successful and the beach came to people.
coolstorybraaah @HuangDHuang I can almost see it, that dream I am dreaming \

Meltwit011 Life is a hard thing.Perhaps it's a simple thing.You choose how it is ? Living is a gift.Live your life to the fullest.But stay the smartest
Meltwit011 I woke up one morning, I discovered that he was not by my side. Like all the man, he betrayed me. So, I went to his house and I killed him.
Meltwit011 @conniezhouuu I don't have any favorite singer ... I listen differents styles and I love all singers I listen. And about you ?

HuangDHuang When I entered the room, I felt as if my heart had stopped beating, and when I saw her face, I felt as if I've been brought back to life.

samyy_o I was moved back and talked to my friends. I fell on a small snow mountain. My friend helped me to stand up and I almost fell on him too.

YoussefBene Short story :It was supposed to be a beautiful day. Kids playing and parents resting.But something happened. An earthquake ruined everything

alexzarzour The first time she said "I love you". The first time she got her first kiss. The first time she said "I miss you".
alexzarzour A young man tried to find a girl,that deserved to be loved and to fall in love. The only girl for him, and that girl was, my girlfriend.
alexzarzour The story is about Antoine. Antoine lived alone all his life And someday he won a lot of money and now he's the most popular guy

dalhiaaihlad From morning till evening on holiday. I am looking for something to do, because the vacations bores me.
dalhiaaihlad I went to see my friend. We went to eat. He choked while eating. I took him to hospital. I lost a good friend.
dalhiaaihlad His wife was kidnapped and killed. David is accused of being the culprit. It will seek by all means to prove the opposite of these word.

tranemil They were childhood friends that drifted apart, he never told her his feelings. It's too late, now.
tranemil The daughter of Bruno was raped and murdered, he kidnaps her killer. He seeks revenge.

khadieJunita A man who was unfaithful, always say that he is at a meeting. One day, his wife followed him and saw him with another woman. She divored.
khadieJunita I liked when you rocked me I liked when you played with me I liked when you loved me I will always love you mom.

Dydy_F My name is Felicia I did my biggest fight with Cancer.Cancer controled my body.And it sent me in paradise.I'm at peace and I won this fight.

ameni_164_tn arnold wants to marry Lina but his parents disagree. He couldn't imagine his life without her, then he commits suicide by drinking poison.

Djboss23 Naruto: this a ninja guy he has a dream to become the best chief of village of the world naruto is his name
Djboss23 The first time I saw this girl i said it's real The second time I saw this girl i said i love her The third time I saw this girl got married

GhitaElidrissi They ask me about love I say violence They tell me about peace Read this sentence Who talks about war They say I'm crazy I'm only heartless
GhitaElidrissi With a big smile, she wakes up; she feels bad, very bad and she starts to cry. Nobody understands her but she was a victim of a bad rape.
GhitaElidrissi When a prince is in love with a woman of honour we said that it's an impossible love. Yet it happened in the Middle Ages, a love until death

simplicityQ Today, I woke up and my bottle of water was empty.I raged and went to the store to get a new bottle.Unfortunately, they were out of stock.

DreamJeny Saw him in youtube, i liked his music. I started to learn and fall in love with his songs, so i became his fan!
DreamJeny The story is about the spook's apprentice. The apprentice learned and fought hard to become the best of all spooks.

amirkrayem The Sun; A big source of energy that illuminates the world; Essential for life; Makes people cheerful; Eliminates darkness and depression.
amirkrayem Bob was walking near a sea. He saw a man who was wearing a luxurious watch and was drowning ! Instead of helping him, Bob stole his watch.

GuerlensRF At 26th december I always cook turkey. My mother and i made the dish and my brothers did the housework. My father slept until that

OtakuSignal Once upon a time, there was a boy. This young man saved the kingdom when he was still 9. Ever since, he is known as the savior of Menbel.

mysweetcherry Cherish your dreams And make them come true Nothing is impossible Believing is the key
mysweetcherry From the first moment they saw each other, they felt a desire and before they knew it, they fell in love. A story about a forbidden love.

jane_172 Me and you for ever. Maybe I am not perfect but I am not the worst. I know what I feel for you and I know you feel the same too
jane_172 One day a guy go out with his car and he accidentally struck a woman. She was at the hospital and he visited her and became good friends

BiigJoo Penner with Kings, sounds like good playoffs for me !

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